It's time to treat you to more from my current work-in-progress.
Last week we had Dante saving Carl in the alley from the two men. This week, I've moved on from that scene a little and we are now in a taxi with both of then heading to Dante's hotel. This is in Carl's POV.
This is still a first draft so pardon any errors. (I should mention that I write in UK English)
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Carl
He didn't carry me all the way to his destination. Shame. A
wide grin curled my lips at being draped over his shoulders and staring at his
tight ass. As soon as we walked away from the night club and dark alley he'd
found me, he placed me back on my wobbly feet and hailed a cab. One stopped. He
pulled me in and told the driver his hotel.
My attempt at making conversation crashed like a lead
balloon. After several one word grunts from him, I gave up with a huff and
curled up beside him. He settled his arm around my shoulder, making me relax
and filling me with a sense of safety. Despite the air of danger that
surrounded him, I didn’t feel threatened by him.
Drawing in a deep breath, his warm scent filled my lungs.
God, he smelled fresh and sharp and masculine. Just like his aura he smelled
like a self-confident man, a man who wasn't afraid to show his sensual and
emotional side.
"You finally stopped talking," he said in a deep
voice that had my stomach tightening.
Looking up at him, his lips were tilted in a smile that left
me speechless. A vision of those full lips claiming mine filled my mind. His
smile turned into a smirk making my cheeks heat up. I still didn't know his name. He'd refused to
tell me at the club.
"If you're going to take me back to your hotel, I need
to know your name," I said with my head tucked back against his chest.
"You can call me D," he replied.
"Dee," I said with a chuckle. "Isn't that a
girl's name?"
Saying that was asking for trouble. This man projected
dominant, virile masculinity. His response came instantly. A hard pinch to the
fleshy top of my arm.
"Ow." Protesting at the pain, I tried to move away
from him. "What did you do that for?"
He held me tight and soothed the sting with his caressing thumb.
"Watch your mouth, brat," he growled and something
melted inside me. "It's the letter D."
"Oh, I get it." I couldn’t stop pushing. It was
just who I was. "D is for Dark. D is for Dangerous. D is for Domineering.
Am I right?"
His shoulders lifted. "All of the above." There
was humour in his voice. His response only increased the mystery surrounding
him.
"It's a good thing I like dark, dangerous and
domineering then," I murmured and snuggled back into his hardness.
"You shouldn't."
Before I could question him about what he meant, the cab
stopped in front of an exclusive hotel built in a crescent shape and the
uniform-clad doorman was opening the car door.
D stepped out first and I went to follow him but he held his
hand up in a 'stay' gesture.
"Wait," he said and swept his gaze across the
entrance and the driveway leading to the road as if he was searching for
something. As if he knew what I'd done.
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I absolutely love their little dialogue exchange, Kai! It's just as dark, dangerous and domineering as D! Great job. xoxo
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ReplyDeleteLove that dialogue - well done!
ReplyDeleteOh, that's a curious and dangerous last line. Nicely done, Kai. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm really enjoying Carl and Dante's story -- looking forward to more!
ReplyDeleteD is definitely domineering! Great tease, Kai!
ReplyDeleteNice dialogue. Well done.
ReplyDeleteOh, that last line.... you can't leave it there!! Fab tease. :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely tease Kai :-)
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